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Old 03-24-2008, 09:30 AM   #8 (permalink)
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It reminds me of a rhyme used to remember something. Nothing worth saving here, scrap it start again, this time try not to use the same words over and over again unless aiming for an intense repetition piece e.g raindrops,raindrops,raindrops,raindrops
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