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HappyHappy · 06-05-2008, 08:44 PM

Well, I think that if this was to be revised/rewritten, it'd make a pretty solid song, man.

You've got the concept, now just try to think about it in different ways and rewrite it a bit. Definetly has potential as I see it.

06-05-2008, 08:44 PM	#9 (permalink)
HappyHappy Groupie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: New York Posts: 1	Well, I think that if this was to be revised/rewritten, it'd make a pretty solid song, man. You've got the concept, now just try to think about it in different ways and rewrite it a bit. Definetly has potential as I see it.