yo this was some ****ing good ****. Very original and a good prose with the syllables. You'd have to explain that last phrase for me though, "cause living love lives not in memory
it lives in the next in line".
That vagueness in your lyrics is something I am trying to acheive myself in my poetry. It's damn hard though. gj
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Saves the day - Hold
"Remember, the only thing we need sometimes
are chilly nights and warmer thighs
cus nothing's like being held, sometimes"
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