This is about a girl my bro was cheating with. It's written by him and from his pow. We are using this for our hardcore/screamo band. give feedback please.
You’ve got my mind
I’ve got our song
playing on repeat
a slow dance, bedside, closed eyes
slow dance, neckline, held close
lips touching shoulders
your breath on my neck
lost inside that night in your bedroom
that one night wasn’t even real
I'm such a sucker for the past
I'm such a sucker for the past
you've got my mind
I've got our song
playing on repeat
two swings, one park, your laugh
two cameras, photos, our laughs
curtains of rain closing us in
an umbrella of leaves above us
I’m still lost inside that kiss of ours
That one kiss that was oh so real
I’m such a sucker for the past
I’m such a sucker for the past
You’ve got my mind
I’ve got our song
Playing on repeat
Playing on repeat
Thank you for reading