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Beany · 06-27-2008, 03:57 PM

Wow they're really good. U2 an influence? I can imagine Bono singing a few of those lines!

Critique?... I'm nowhere near being an "expert" but my own opinion...
I'd stay away from too many sappy lines. Just not a fan of them myself. It's been done to death by so many that they all sort of lose meaning. You steer clear of these sorta lines(even if ya do come dangerously close at some points! lol) and the verses are cool.

Good work!

06-27-2008, 03:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
Beany Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Ireland Posts: 58	Wow they're really good. U2 an influence? I can imagine Bono singing a few of those lines! Critique?... I'm nowhere near being an "expert" but my own opinion... I'd stay away from too many sappy lines. Just not a fan of them myself. It's been done to death by so many that they all sort of lose meaning. You steer clear of these sorta lines(even if ya do come dangerously close at some points! lol) and the verses are cool. Good work! __________________ Well I got this guitar and I learned how to make it talk Last edited by Beany; 06-28-2008 at 07:40 AM.