I really like the feeling of it. It's awesome in it's expressiveness and conciseness. I'm not a fan of emo/ hardcore lyrics, which I think this is. I think your work is great but it seems like there is a cliche in every line, like "entombed", "vengeance burns inside", "blood filled tears", etc. Not fair that I don't really like the genre, but it seems like a good emo song.
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a music nazi....is still a nazi
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