YEAH DOO. I
dig it. This bit,
Quote:
I appreciate the effort, but
Leave me alone in my pay-by-the-hour
Roach motel. The damage is done, doc.
The crime is done, the police are gone
The blood is drawn, and my emotions
Died in an ugly roach motel.
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and this,
Quote:
Doc, I appreciate the effort,
But I'm wounded and it won't go away.
Leave me in peace, because
I've already got my disease.
So take your ****in' filthy hands off of me.
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Those are my favorites. But on the whole I think it's very good. Raw, edgy. I like the subject matter. You've got a way with words. Two thumbs up. I can see where your love of Ginsberg comes in.