holy **** its crowe! i've been without your helpful criticisms and vague vibe of internet camaraderie for so long!
i recognize/agree with what you brought up in your crit, and take it to heart. I just did the " 'bout" thing because sometimes I'm a syllable freak, but as you said it appears to work out either way.
Post more of your own stuff soon! i haven't seen any in time.
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