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Some words that've been bouncing around my head.(comment plz)
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10-11-2008, 02:07 PM
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Fyrenza
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nice poem
i think you might have meant
conscienciouslessness
but that really isn't a word
so you might substitute something like 'madness'
also might change 'wish' to 'wish
ing
' to maintain your grammatical tenses
good job!
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