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Old 10-17-2008, 04:43 PM   #21 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer
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Also love the last line. But this is my favorite:

"You're still paper beneath the grit."

The sandpaper metaphor is kinda overused in this capacity, but on the whole I like it. What made you write it?
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