Oh, wow ~ no.
When i said i didn't get your poetry,
i meant that, like, i have no idea of the refs you make to people because i don't know the first thing about their lives or circumstances.
There are no tips nor helps i could give you, and a critique would just be how i felt about the actual words you used.
i don't care for dark allusions very much, so unless all i wanted to do was hurt your feelers, i really have no business replying to your poetry. i'm sorry, because i DO feel pretty strongly about it ~ when people share something as personal as a piece of writing, they are opening themselves to you, letting you look inside, and it's real hard to accept someone picking away at your 'baby,' especially if they don't know the first thing about the methods, background, etc., that you're basing the whole thing on.
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