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KaneFails · 10-19-2008, 09:34 AM

I've never been all that great with constructive criticism, but here it goes:

I really like the structure you used for this one, since it helps make the song really flow. So good job on that.

I also admire how you made the message in it very clear, and easy to understand. Not too many people like lyrics that act like a brick wall to the song's true meaning (although it really makes you think about it.)

Other than that, I don't think there's much else I could point out to you. Good job on this one. It's better than what I did, at least. =P [/modesty]

10-19-2008, 09:34 AM	#2 (permalink)
KaneFails Groupie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 33	I've never been all that great with constructive criticism, but here it goes: I really like the structure you used for this one, since it helps make the song really flow. So good job on that. I also admire how you made the message in it very clear, and easy to understand. Not too many people like lyrics that act like a brick wall to the song's true meaning (although it really makes you think about it.) Other than that, I don't think there's much else I could point out to you. Good job on this one. It's better than what I did, at least. =P [/modesty]