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Old 10-19-2008, 02:16 PM   #11 (permalink)
WendyCal
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Cool

Quote:
Originally Posted by KaneFails View Post
Oh, please. I'd never take my songwriting skillz to the mainstream. I'd never be able to write what I want to say. Instead I'd always be writing the same thing over and over again. :P

Indie > Mainstream amirite?

Oh, and here's a hopefully better chorus:
Creativity won't make the paper fall,
Unoriginality is the answer!
A song about the boy who took you for a fool
Revolutionary won't get you anywhere,
So write a song about how she kicked you in the family jewels
Familiarity will get your name written in history's halls.
WOW!!! The only thing i might change would be "it's" to "That's" in the third line.

Excellent ~ and, now, knowing that you'll not release it to the general public, i feel complimented that you chose us to share it with!

Thank you!
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