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Old 10-25-2008, 10:08 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by wolverinewolfweiselpigeon
Because it's not a song, there are fluency issues you should work out in the 2nd and 4th stanzas.
Well, it all depends on the way you read it.
When I read it out loud, it flows rather nicely.
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