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Old 11-26-2008, 04:56 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by guitargirl_93 View Post
Not too shabby, but I'm gonna be a grammar Nazi here and tell you that I would probably find it better if you spelled "o" as "Oh" and if you didn't capitalize "Why" in the middle of a line.
Who says you need to abide by proper grammar conventions in poetry...

Look at e.e. cummings.
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