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Old 11-26-2008, 01:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Talking spend all night with me

Spend All Night With Me written by Anthony ???????



do you remember the day we first met
i told you baby told you not to fret
i told ya i gotta hold ya
told ya im a soldier
i can take a hit
Im ready for rejection
i swear i dont need perfection

run away run away run away with me
come on baby come on baby come on you'll see
how you can spend all night
spend all night with me
i feel so alive
ifeel so good
i wanna hold you baby
i know that i should
don't want you to go
o please stay with me
i wanna hold you baby
i will beg on my knees

do you remenber that night
i hate it when we fight
i told you i was sorry
i asked you not to leave
o Why'd you say no
o baby please dont go
i really really need ya
i know i gotta see ya

run away run away run away with me
come on baby come on baby come on you'll see
how you can spend all night
spend all night with me
i feel so alive
ifeel so good
i wanna hold you baby
i know that i should
don't want you to go
o please stay with me
i wanna hold you baby
i will beg on my knees
run away run away run away with me
come on baby come on baby come on you'll see
how you can spend all night
spend all night with me
i feel so alive
ifeel so good
i wanna hold you baby
i know that i should
don't want you to go
o please stay with me
i wanna hold you baby
i will beg on my knees

o baby spend all night with






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Old 11-26-2008, 01:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Not too shabby, but I'm gonna be a grammar Nazi here and tell you that I would probably find it better if you spelled "o" as "Oh" and if you didn't capitalize "Why" in the middle of a line.
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Old 11-26-2008, 04:56 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Not too shabby, but I'm gonna be a grammar Nazi here and tell you that I would probably find it better if you spelled "o" as "Oh" and if you didn't capitalize "Why" in the middle of a line.
Who says you need to abide by proper grammar conventions in poetry...

Look at e.e. cummings.
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Old 11-27-2008, 10:03 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Who says you need to abide by proper grammar conventions in poetry...

Look at e.e. cummings.
Sorry I'm an OCD bitch.
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Old 11-28-2008, 12:24 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Who says you need to abide by proper grammar conventions in poetry...

Look at e.e. cummings.

e.e. cummings was a cunt.

Or should I say...

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Old 11-28-2008, 04:06 PM   #6 (permalink)
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e.e. cummings was a cunt.

Or should I say...

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He was indeed a cunt. One that didn't use punctuation.
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Old 12-07-2008, 01:31 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Who says you need to abide by proper grammar conventions in poetry...

Look at e.e. cummings.
He's not e.e. cummings though, you have to do a couple things first to be recognized as a e.e. cummings
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