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Wifey Boozer · 12-07-2008, 07:35 AM

At first I didn't like it, thought it was gonna be really redundant... but towards the middle it started to charm me. I like the last two stanzas the most... but the beginning rhyming needs some work, it's rather predictable.

PS. I'm taking you up on that crit for crit.

12-07-2008, 07:35 AM	#2 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	At first I didn't like it, thought it was gonna be really redundant... but towards the middle it started to charm me. I like the last two stanzas the most... but the beginning rhyming needs some work, it's rather predictable. PS. I'm taking you up on that crit for crit. __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr] Last edited by Wifey Boozer; 12-07-2008 at 11:05 AM.