the love song is 17 seconds long, and it makes no sense.
sorry.
Also, I don't think intelligence will have anything to do with people not understanding your love song.
Just the fact that it does not make sense in the state that it is now.
Add an 's' every now and then and maybe don't refer to something as the 'who' and it will make you a million bucks.
It's good though.
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