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Old 01-05-2009, 01:12 PM   #11 (permalink)
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It's Intelligence-not Intelligent....

Well english have alot of different meaning
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Old 01-05-2009, 01:22 PM   #12 (permalink)
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No I am pointing out that you used the wrong word which is quite ironic given the statement you wrote.
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Old 01-05-2009, 02:10 PM   #13 (permalink)
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the love song is 17 seconds long, and it makes no sense.
sorry.

Also, I don't think intelligence will have anything to do with people not understanding your love song.
Just the fact that it does not make sense in the state that it is now.

Add an 's' every now and then and maybe don't refer to something as the 'who' and it will make you a million bucks.

It's good though.
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Old 01-05-2009, 04:15 PM   #14 (permalink)
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the love song is 17 seconds long, and it makes no sense.
sorry.

Also, I don't think intelligence will have anything to do with people not understanding your love song.
Just the fact that it does not make sense in the state that it is now.

Add an 's' every now and then and maybe don't refer to something as the 'who' and it will make you a million bucks.

It's good though.
Urmm if u asking....I did say this is a PART ....not the whole song,all I needed is asking for this part to see if is good, if that what u saying up there about 17 second
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Old 01-05-2009, 04:33 PM   #15 (permalink)
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no it's not good. sorry. it is not correct
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Old 01-05-2009, 04:46 PM   #16 (permalink)
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does title?
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Old 01-05-2009, 06:30 PM   #19 (permalink)
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"does song needed to make sense?"

Is this a joke?
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"does song needed to make sense?"

Is this a joke?
Does joke needed to make sense?
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