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Old 01-17-2009, 03:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
Mike Smith
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Default Review My Catchy Pop/Acoustic/Indie Song?

Its untitled at the moment but heres the song i'd like you guys to take a look at and review if possible!

Verse 1:

I need your love
But I know I cant get it

Ive missed your face
Since you walked away from me

Chorus:

And I'm trying, trying, trying
Trying to walk away

And I never, never, never
Think this love will fade

Cause I miss your face
And I need you now
In my life

Verse 2:

Since the day you walked away
Ive never been the same

All I have to say is
I want you back babe

Chorus:

And I'm trying, trying, trying
Trying to walk away

And I never, never, never
Think this love will fade

Cause I miss your face
And I need you now
In my life

Repeat Verse 1:

I need your love
But I know I cant get it

Ive missed your face
Since you walked away from me

Chorus:

And I'm trying, trying, trying
Trying to walk away

And I never, never, never
Think this love will fade

Cause I miss your face
And I need you now
In my life
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