well I do like the lyrics of a song or poem to make me think (when i'm in the right mood) and some of this is good but a lot of it is bad grammar and doesn't make sense at all.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killertu
I don't think people with less intelligent know what it mean
|
incorrect. correct grammar would be: I don't think people with less intelligence know what it means.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killertu
Is you,that make me the who
|
really bad. i have no idea what this means. maybe: It's you, that makes me the... something
Quote:
Originally Posted by Killertu
IT mostly the first sentence,but what u think
|
incorrect. correct: It's mostly the first sentence, but what do you think?
you should try to learn English better before you go and try to write in it.
