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Old 01-15-2009, 07:25 PM   #61 (permalink)
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my first question is: Is english your first or second language?
my second question is : Is you, who wrote this about you? Sorry I thought that might make sense to you for some reason.
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Old 01-16-2009, 02:52 AM   #62 (permalink)
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my first question is: Is english your first or second language?
my second question is : Is you, who wrote this about you? Sorry I thought that might make sense to you for some reason.
you obviously missed the part about vietnam and only moving to the states 4 years ago.
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Old 01-17-2009, 02:16 AM   #63 (permalink)
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I tried singing it to myself.
In the words of Simon Cowell....it sounds like a cat falling from the Empire State Building. It is absolutely horrid.
To every good songwriter is a good vocabulary.

Get one, rewrite it.
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Old 01-19-2009, 01:39 AM   #64 (permalink)
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Well, I guess I'm not very intelligent according to you, because that makes no sense at all. I really hope that you're not pursuing a career as a song writer, because your home will have dirt floors and a tarp as a roof. Completely and utterly terrible. Usually I try to use constructive criticism and would normally say something like, "Well, it's alright, but you should work on _______", but I just can't say that this time around because that has to be the single most terrible thing I've ever read.
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Old 01-22-2009, 03:51 PM   #65 (permalink)
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Is you,that make me the who
You're not quite that talented yet.
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Old 01-24-2009, 03:12 PM   #66 (permalink)
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well I do like the lyrics of a song or poem to make me think (when i'm in the right mood) and some of this is good but a lot of it is bad grammar and doesn't make sense at all.

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I don't think people with less intelligent know what it mean
incorrect. correct grammar would be: I don't think people with less intelligence know what it means.
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Is you,that make me the who
really bad. i have no idea what this means. maybe: It's you, that makes me the... something
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IT mostly the first sentence,but what u think
incorrect. correct: It's mostly the first sentence, but what do you think?

you should try to learn English better before you go and try to write in it.
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Old 01-25-2009, 12:27 PM   #67 (permalink)
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Well, does anyone like this?
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Old 01-30-2009, 12:51 PM   #68 (permalink)
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umm thats a tough one......i think it depends on music or band...i guess i dont know 4 sure.sometimes its good to write the most stupid lyrics ever and turn it into masterpiece (4 example : most of pistols songs never made sense but look at them i mean they r huge ) but if u look it in a way,lets say, rihanna , if u hear umbrella ull probably think its ridiculous. in conclusion i dont think that good lyrics r the key i think its the way u express urself.
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Old 01-31-2009, 04:26 PM   #69 (permalink)
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Touche, hopefully there will be a turn around.
you try writing a song in vietnamese smart guy.
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Old 01-31-2009, 09:13 PM   #70 (permalink)
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I didn't know he was vietnamese
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