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Old 02-03-2009, 01:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I'm not normally one to come out and say that lyrics suck or are awful, but this is bad.
First of all, love songs make me sick, and the line 'you're my little angel' was an awful one to base a song on.
I cannot find a line in here that is worth mentioning. The whole thing lacks any structure or continuity and I cannot see these lyrics fitting any song.
Yuck. Thumbs down.
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