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Old 02-03-2009, 06:27 PM   #2 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer
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"what should be
what will never be..."

is that a Led Zeppelin allusion?

I like the first stanza. I can't think of anything to change about it from my perspective.

The first two lines of the second stanza are blank, like they don't mean anything... the last two make sense, but they are cliche. Is that true though? When people speak from their hearts nowadays, is it heard? Do people even speak from their hearts nowadays? Whose even speaking? Why?

The last stanza shouldn't be there I don't think.
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