Alright, thank you very much for the criticism.
Never listened to Led Zeppelin so I sincerely doubt it.
First two lines I was attempting to get at the aggressiveness of government and how it'll strike the weak? I'm really not sure it's been a while.
Last stanza sounds like a completely different poem. Haha, it very well might be as I found it in my math notebook which is almost filled with poetry... could be why I'm failing math...
Anyways thanks! Its definitely not one of my favorites I've written, I wrote this one I really liked but I think I'll have to uncover it... damn unorganizational habits (lets pretend that's a word).
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by lucifer_sam
If your love for music stops where you can hear the difference between 'super blackened green death metal' and 'technical zoomacroom symphonic metal', then you're a tosser in my book.
|
|