Well Lutherfish you seem to actually care about writing... this is kinda what my stuff looked like at first. But really its a little generic and some of the lines were just a little cheesy and whiny
"And even now I couldn’t stop King Kong"
"his was the necessary route
I’m ****ing steaming and pouting
And ****ing screaming and shouting
I need all these feelings out"
But keep writing man it takes practice. Be more abstract maybe? Give some originality.
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Originally Posted by lucifer_sam
If your love for music stops where you can hear the difference between 'super blackened green death metal' and 'technical zoomacroom symphonic metal', then you're a tosser in my book.
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