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Old 03-05-2009, 01:34 PM   #45 (permalink)
chard
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: england
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walking in the shadows until im noticed
walking in the dark until my work is marked
completing my works so i will be graded
critics are welcome also praises
bring on an assault if you do so wish
throw me overboard il swim with the fish
if you dont like il get on my bike
well if you do not reply il presume uve all died.
flicking through these poetic pages
so much work ive written in ages
all my work has been seen, from friends and family.
please let me know what you think,
before my lower decks spring a hole and my ship sinks
knowing is better than not
if it rocks or it is complete rot
all you who are invisible to the naked eye
dont be shy answer me with a reply?
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