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Old 03-04-2009, 01:06 PM   #41 (permalink)
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Default our lords promise

Time ticks by without a blink of an eye
from all those who have already been sold
whose cards have fell and have had to fold
into the pit of grief no exit unless sell your souls
angry frustrated people with nothing to call their own
except for a few measily gestures of hope
but nothing for them to see or feel
without cash nothing is real.

going one way fast and blind
pick up what you can within time
protection none from behind
fallen, failed to walk the line.

disturbing facts that haunt most but not all
not all of us are confronted with an unfailing wall
you gambled with more than your lives
you dismissed the one who did the ultimate sacrifice
man cant save you so pray for mercy god might
deliver yourself from the clutches of the beast
just call on him he will give you light
join me and my friends at the celebrational feast.
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Old 03-04-2009, 05:26 PM   #42 (permalink)
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Default phantom of the opera

apart from the clear crystal, all seeing eye
how does one appear to the phantom in the sky
are you as clear as you think
or are you hiding something pink
are you a spotless person body and mind
friendly out going, giving and kind.

blah blah avin a party tonight
out with the lads first get into a fight
decrease the days stresses clear my head of ****e
get with my babe and her babes tonight

dont care what happens im young and free
fed up with people trying to break me
fed up with hearing old folks history
when they were young they were just like me

blah blah drop dead ha! its not me its voices in my head
dont get to close to me this book isnt well read
the pages might seem familiar! just go back to bed
this book isnt finished yet, but what it hasnt got is any regrets.
i should know oy place your bets.

thats what ive got to say to the phantom in the sky
live today for tomorrow we die
ive booked a ticket on the highway to hell tour
dont want to know about the love of jesus at all.

so determined heading for a fall
whats going through the minds of young peo-ple
to far gone now do i really care
cant see the point of my willingness to share.

oh phantom in the sky they no not what they do
oh phantom, forgive them, i pray they will learn of you
oh phantom i bow before your throne
oh phantom only knows, oh phantom.
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Old 03-05-2009, 10:09 AM   #43 (permalink)
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Not that poetry can't be about someone else's situation or a work of fiction, but since I'm assuming it's about you. I don't know who influenced you, but you should stick around that person. Lol.
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Old 03-05-2009, 10:12 AM   #44 (permalink)
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Default Haiku: Time, Free Them

Haiku: Time, free them
Judgement clock dread I
My young sickly flowers shall
Flourish as I die
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Old 03-05-2009, 01:34 PM   #45 (permalink)
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Default message on a wire

walking in the shadows until im noticed
walking in the dark until my work is marked
completing my works so i will be graded
critics are welcome also praises
bring on an assault if you do so wish
throw me overboard il swim with the fish
if you dont like il get on my bike
well if you do not reply il presume uve all died.
flicking through these poetic pages
so much work ive written in ages
all my work has been seen, from friends and family.
please let me know what you think,
before my lower decks spring a hole and my ship sinks
knowing is better than not
if it rocks or it is complete rot
all you who are invisible to the naked eye
dont be shy answer me with a reply?
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Old 03-05-2009, 02:22 PM   #46 (permalink)
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Quote:
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Haiku: Time, free them
Judgement clock dread I
My young sickly flowers shall
Flourish as I die
How the heck did this get here? This was in a thread I started...
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Old 03-06-2009, 03:51 AM   #47 (permalink)
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Default live a little

If its a holiday you need gal
then i propose we go
somewhere you will feel free
somewhere not to slow

youve been working way to hard
im repeating myself take a break
its time you show yourself
who and what you really are

i know under that exterior you are full of life
you have to agree weve not seen it lately
its all been trouble and strife

I can book a holiday for the last week of may
plenty of time for you to get yourself ready
no excuses please im getting very tired
seeing you day in and day out, wired

life is for enjoying and i wish to enjoy it with you
i know you chose your carreer and your great at what you do
but enoughs enough its time to take a break to
before time breaks you

never thought id ever have to work so hard
just for you to take a break
something always comes up,work is thrown in your face
i dont know anyone who works as hard as you
you give it all you got

please give the same in your relationship
and i would truely be high
i would spread wings my darling i would fly
theres no-one else i want to be with its you and you alone
tell your boss when you going away now pick up the phone
tomorrow is a new day it hasnt been written yet
lets make a fresh start my luvly fly somewhere thats not wet
you can pick the destination and where we stay
how long we stay for a week or a day
il let you sleep on it now dream happy dreams
i only want the best for you, you are everything to me.sleep.zzzzzzzzzzzz
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Old 03-06-2009, 04:59 AM   #48 (permalink)
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Default ideas

now heres an idea
im going to throw in your lap
read it by tomorrow i need feed back
on how to present it, and whom i should send it
and what the title should read.

you have great knowledge an IQ above and beyond
thats why i trust you and feel we could bond
for i know you will tell me the truth
about my idea and how to reach our countrys youth

i dont want to come over pushy
but i need your thoughts on it now
a new era on enlightenment all peoples say wow
if only i could get my work published
im sure that would be all it would take
all mistakes rendered the progress it could make

i know no-one has thought of it, its original
yes im out there im ready and waiting for your call
its explosive stuff that will certainly change how we think
its got to be better than the same old stink

i just pray the world opens its doors
and hears and listens to my ideas and what there for
to put my ideas in motion and know its all cosher
tomorrow is a new day it hasnt been written yet
im quietly confident on what i want il get.
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Old 03-06-2009, 05:19 PM   #49 (permalink)
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I like it, it delivers a good message.
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Old 03-07-2009, 03:23 PM   #50 (permalink)
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Default cloud hopping

i am a victim of circumstance
a feeling that has shadowed me
most of my adult life
i dont believe in coincidences
but i believe coincidences believe in me
a frame work completed
without the touch of human hands
a succession of events that overthrows logic
taming a wild soul imprisoning though allowed to roam

numbers the backbone of humanity
revealing puzzles which may or may not be ever understood
secrets in time shift rooms in which earth reveals
that man has more secrets to declare
where history is present and the present is history

but only the brave and the chosen are invited
only one has ever gone in and returned twice.
where your dreams are no escape
the only weapon you have is faith.
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