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Old 03-10-2009, 03:50 PM   #129 (permalink)
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i understood it, i have problems making it that short. ONE stanza? is that what you are asking me to do?
...No. I meant that to add flow to your poetry, you should have around the same number of syllables in each line. It makes it roll off the tounge easier. So, first of all, I said four stanza's. Unfortunately I fukked-up, I meant twenty to twenty-five syllables per stanza. That would be about five to six syllables per line. Look at 7guagejames, he got the idea. Sorry, my bad.
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