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Freebase Dali · 03-11-2009, 06:56 PM

I really don't want to be critical, but this isn't good on any level I can think of.

I want to believe in what you're saying, but your concept jumps around faster than I can contemplate a meaning for. It's almost as if you just found a bunch of words you like and put them together.

There needs to be a point. An ultimate realization. A reason.
A story.
Something.

03-11-2009, 06:56 PM	#66 (permalink)
Freebase Dali Partying on the inside Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 5,584	I really don't want to be critical, but this isn't good on any level I can think of. I want to believe in what you're saying, but your concept jumps around faster than I can contemplate a meaning for. It's almost as if you just found a bunch of words you like and put them together. There needs to be a point. An ultimate realization. A reason. A story. Something.