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darkcornerinthecloset · 03-13-2009, 03:15 PM

Im trying something different; no stanza breaks. some advice, please?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I want to escape the bigots who
chain me here,
who handcuff
my wrists to a chair.
I want to die on
my feet,
feel the wind on
my face
as I turn towards
my Father.
I want to die in her arms
with her fingers stroking
my hair.
I want to escape with you into the summer
feel the grass between
my toes
and feel you standing right beside me.
Though it may be a sin you are all that I want
now and forever.
Amen.

03-13-2009, 03:15 PM	#131 (permalink)
darkcornerinthecloset Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Rochester, NY Posts: 160	What I want Im trying something different; no stanza breaks. some advice, please? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I want to escape the bigots who chain me here, who handcuff my wrists to a chair. I want to die on my feet, feel the wind on my face as I turn towards my Father. I want to die in her arms with her fingers stroking my hair. I want to escape with you into the summer feel the grass between my toes and feel you standing right beside me. Though it may be a sin you are all that I want now and forever. Amen.