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Old 03-31-2009, 08:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
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It's great imagery, and it'll carry really well if the melody is right.

Tis' a bit cliche, but hey, whatever comes out, comes out, right?
Excellent job with sectioning the lyrics by the way, they flow nicely.
If you ever get a melody to it, I'd love to hear it.
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