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Double X · 04-19-2009, 09:42 PM

Needs...

1. Better/interesting vocabulary - there have a million songs about depressed heartbroken guy...whats new, really? use some innovative idea, word or something
2. Visible melody - maybe there is I dunno
3. It seems very unfinished and sporadic, this can often be good (Flaming Lips, Syd Barrett, etc) but it still needs structure

And I would advise not bothering people for advice through pm. I am okay with it because I'm in a good mood, but I bet a mod or someone really wouldn't like it.

If you want song help, maybe go...writingsongs.com songwriting forum :: Index... because you haven't really posted anywhere else but here and MB would rather have regular members contributing than hobos that wander around and spit out random stuff.

04-19-2009, 09:42 PM	#6 (permalink)
Double X sleepe Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: boston Posts: 1,140	Needs... 1. Better/interesting vocabulary - there have a million songs about depressed heartbroken guy...whats new, really? use some innovative idea, word or something 2. Visible melody - maybe there is I dunno 3. It seems very unfinished and sporadic, this can often be good (Flaming Lips, Syd Barrett, etc) but it still needs structure And I would advise not bothering people for advice through pm. I am okay with it because I'm in a good mood, but I bet a mod or someone really wouldn't like it. If you want song help, maybe go...writingsongs.com songwriting forum :: Index... because you haven't really posted anywhere else but here and MB would rather have regular members contributing than hobos that wander around and spit out random stuff.