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Old 04-28-2009, 12:01 PM   #107 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by coryallen2 View Post
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Good input once again cory.

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I sense my mind being renewed
by faith im closer still, to you
My lord my god the allmighty.
After having an aabb rhyming pattern, it would seem odd to put this here unless you wanted it to seem abrupt.

Also, "allmighty" should be "almighty"

The lyrics seem alright if you're going for a gospel/soft/love type song.
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