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Old 04-24-2009, 01:59 PM   #101 (permalink)
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Exploding of intense aggrivation
from reading factual documentation
to be thrown into tribulation
when all is said and done.

Dogs that rule the pitch
no after thought destroying relationships
disregard all thats gentle
when all is said and done.

A feeling of complete desperation
not knowing your own station
a faultering foundation
when all is said and done.

Wavering responsibilities casting aside
spinning lies, a vow that we swore to abide
has no relevance in daily life
when all is said and done.

Dictate your laws upon us all
a whirlwind to see how many will fall
calculating the outcome favouring your odds
death to the fish, first to go is cod
when all is said and done.

We vote you in, make us proud
be a visionary see us through
nolonger look upon us from under a shroud
this great land under a cloud
where all we see is you
when all is said and done.

Solid ground turns to quick sand
within a blink of my eye
only hurt and death we understand
thats why your kind must die
when all is said and done.

May it be swift, a future clear
a whole attitude shift, nomore tears.
my hand is out always, embrace it while you can
carry on, i will see you hang
when all is said and done.

Rapist, murderer yes you at the top
of land, sea and air and people
its no laughing matter, to ignore the truth tooth to tooth
when all is said and done.
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Old 04-25-2009, 08:27 AM   #102 (permalink)
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Default box of fear

Look at it this way
look up and beyond
nothing should worry you
from the few, over the great pond.
Darling trust me tomorrow may never come
so stop your crying, dont look so glum
i am with you forever it shall be
we will face it together you and me.

chorus,The sun is beating down
lets enjoy this day,didnt want to go out anywhere today
just wanted to spend it with you,do as i do.

for when you smile, to me its a summers day
could be cold outside and sky grey
but to me it wouldnt matter anyway
looking into your eyes i have to say.

while everyone is busy not noticing whats wrong
the few that listen to the news know whats on
parts of the world is disapearing, yes gone
countrys leaders discussing it, no-one addmitting to it, no none.

Lets open the chilled champagne
which weve been saving for a day like today
lets celebrate our lives together
and be honest it couldnt be any better
i think its because we have nothing nothing better to do,
that we involve ourselfs in it,no interfearance from the public
heated debates mindless, upset with their points of view.chorus.
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Old 04-27-2009, 11:23 AM   #103 (permalink)
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Default costly times

Desperate times constitutes desperate measures
dig deep for nocturnal pleasures.
Be obliged by peoples differences
from a race of pollutants.
Refrain yourself from over stepping the mark
a bite is more painful than a bark.
My desire is to see
beyond the cavities
far from the seeing eye
where i may live life.
Im regularly told im misunderstood
spend time, deliver me from that page
no time to think,it goes to quick.
People talk as quick as they sneeze,
only listen when there on there knees.
Success decieves and warrants arrest,
it takes one to know one to pass the test.
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Old 04-28-2009, 03:29 AM   #104 (permalink)
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Lightbulb face the front

Trying to find a way out,
or just to get ahead.
Maybe im trying to hard
im losing my grip, surely slip and fall.
chorus:
It wasnt always like this
their was a time, when nothing did go wrong
and how i wish i could still belong
in, that world.

My generosity has ultimatly, condemned me
for i have let, things slide
and now theres no place to hide.
Im being ridiculed for who i am,
and only now i fully understand.

So now i have to toughen up
let no-one walk over me
the way their used to
must now not be seen.
To treat everyone as potential enemy's
though still pretending they are friends
what a predicament to get my, self in.chorus:
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Old 04-28-2009, 11:04 AM   #105 (permalink)
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Cool you ain't dragging me down

Spread your wings and fly once more
open your heart more, than youv'e done before
here these words now i sing
carry me on your beautiful wings.

I dont count the cost, your a friend in need
im here to save the lost,your a friend in deed.
My love for you will last to the end of days
i want to be like you,knowing your ways.

Learn to love all peoples the same
no matter how strange the game
i have to see for myself
unconditional love without, gain of wealth.

My life is yours, and my will,
theres no-one else that could fulfill.
I have dreams, though none greater
than serving you now, than later.
I sense my mind being renewed
by faith im closer still, to you
My lord my god the almighty.

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Old 04-28-2009, 11:07 AM   #106 (permalink)
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Old 04-28-2009, 12:01 PM   #107 (permalink)
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Good input once again cory.

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I sense my mind being renewed
by faith im closer still, to you
My lord my god the allmighty.
After having an aabb rhyming pattern, it would seem odd to put this here unless you wanted it to seem abrupt.

Also, "allmighty" should be "almighty"

The lyrics seem alright if you're going for a gospel/soft/love type song.
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Old 04-28-2009, 12:37 PM   #108 (permalink)
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Sing and play an accoustic guitar. Its a slow song ,the ending is not abrupt it is gently administered.
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Old 04-28-2009, 01:44 PM   #109 (permalink)
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Sing and play an accoustic guitar. Its a slow song ,the ending is not abrupt it is gently administered.
I'd probably need to hear the song, but I guess it would be different depending on how you went about ending it.
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Old 04-28-2009, 03:53 PM   #110 (permalink)
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Wink sweet, sweet food

Im at the supermarket pushing a trolley down the isles
cant find what im looking for been here a while
food tormenting my mind, expensive if im after nice.
But food ultimatly keeps me there still,
have to eat get my fill.
Mountains of food ready to be taken,
i will not move i cannot be shaken.
Hot,cold and frozen its all in my trolley
volume low but i hear buddy holly.
Im already hooked, theres nothing over looked.
Feeling upset im leaving, im at the til
theres nothing quite like it when you recieve the bill.
I never think of money, only my belly.
Back in my car and home
but i promise il be back tomorrow.
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