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Old 04-29-2009, 03:15 AM   #10 (permalink)
daysleeper1985
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Originally Posted by Veridical Fiction View Post
I like the imagery, but I'm not keen on the repetitive three liner.
yeah i guess i tried a bit too hard to get away from a poetic form and threw it in there without any serious amount of thought...was listening to alot of rory gallagher and james brown hen i was writing this so if you can try to merge the soulful blues guitarism that is rory with the crazed soulful blues that is james browns voice then you get a vague idea of how i could imagine this being played but it is the sort of lyric that could be done in many styles i feel...cheers for the feedback
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