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Old 05-18-2009, 01:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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need some help and advice on how to improve this song cause it is pretty crap right now
thanks x


Its All About Her


im trying to hold on to my life
but its so god damn hard right now
you dont make it any easier for me
cause all i ever hear you say is

why cant you be more like her
getting her straight A's
why cant you talk more like her
its i dont mind not i dont care
thats what she'd say
its all about her

im holding my feelings back
from you
i just want you to treat me the same
and love me the way i am
cause all i ever hear you say is

why cant you be more like her
getting her straight A's
why cant you talk more like her
its i dont mind not i dont care
thats what she'd say
its all about her
( x2 )
its all about her

Everyone says ive changed
i didnt see it at first
but now i realize thats why im alone
its cause ive changed
its cause ive changed
and i guess its made it worse
made my life worse

why cant you be more like her
getting her straight A's
why cant you talk more like her
its i dont mind not i dont care
thats what she'd say
its all about her

its all about her ( x4 )






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