Originally Posted by tanner99

My album will be pretty dark and its gonna be a concept album.
I would love any suggestions on my lyrics.

This songs gonna be pretty upbeat. Probably one of my first songs in my album.

I see you in the distance
I need some assistance

My legs have been amputated
and my heart has been torn out
I am dead and there is no doubt

Do I need to shout!
I know you hear me!
I need some attention
You're really building up some tension..

My legs have been amputated
and my heart has been torn out
I am dead and there is no doubt

**** you
**** you
**** you
**** you

You're too ignorant for me
Cant you see you have blinded me
Then threw me into the black sea

You have killed me by making me kill myself

I can't move
but my eyes are open
I see
The world above me

The fishes start nibbling on my eyes
And an eel goes down my throat
And pops out of my hollow chest
out of my hollow chest...


ok next song. This will be a faster song. Heavy distortion and such.

I know I am dead
But I plan to come back
To show you my hate

I'm dealin with the devil
I am a rebel
Life Isn't fair
When you have an affair
You should be prepared...

Resurrection from cause of Abomination
Resurrection from cause of Abomination
Resurrection from cause of Abomination
Resurrection from cause of Abomination

I'm signing a declaration
For world Domination
I'm signing a declaration
For world Domination

I will rise where I died
There will be no place to hide
All this because you lied

Sleep tight
I will be back soon and I will devour you and everyone else

In this song I will add a lot of distortion and delay on my voice.

The fire within my eyes burn so deeply
I told you, you should'nt have decieved me
Now I am out of the sea
All of you should flee

I am here to cause some destruction
I have no other function
Then to make you see your fate

Scream for help
Look for faith

Scream for help
Look for faith

Scream for help
Look for faith

There is no escape

Do you still believe
Or do you still think i'm a fake?

I will personally take you to Hell!

I am the angel that fell
I am the forsaken one
I am your worst nightmare


Ok, 4th song. gonna be slow and acoustic.

Our doom is near
There is a lot of fear
There are a lot of tears

Our time has come
There is nothing to do but sigh and cry
It's the end of humanity

The sun is black
I wish we can go back
to the happier times or earth
but the darkness has fallen upon us...

Hush my little angel
dont you cry
we will soon be put out of our misery

we cant do a thing
so lets just enjoy our last day on earth together

What have we done to deserve this?
All I want is one last kiss
Before we depart
from this world of dark......

its so raww. someone help me!!!