thanks

i thought no one was going to reply so i edited my post like a moron, and than someone replied lol
so i edited back but got lazy and didn't write the bit about english not being my first language :P
anyways, thanks

thanks for the critiques

unfortunately most of the changes can't be made since it would mess the singing melody, and also, the song's already recorded hehe :P
i'm glad you liked the metaphor