Originally Posted by bungalow

Potential like, he knows how to spell and arrange words and could conceivably, on the off chance that he chooses the right words, arrange them in a way that resembled a good song...or what? Because again, this song is 100% awful if we're talking content. I'm not trying to personally attack here, but really. Everything about this is bad, from the simplistic, repetitive rhyme scheme to the childish, nonsensical lyrics. I mean, I can agree that he has potential in the same way that every other person on earth has potential--with enough practice he's bound to improve (like anyone...), but there really is nothing redeeming about this song whatsoever, and if he continues to write in this manner he will never draw anything but derisive laughter from me.