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riseagainstrocks · 05-23-2005, 08:55 AM

you seem sad. the rhyme scheme is nice however some of the wording (notably the second stanza) seesm cliched

05-23-2005, 08:55 AM	#2 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	you seem sad. the rhyme scheme is nice however some of the wording (notably the second stanza) seesm cliched __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...