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Originally Posted by Terrible Lizard
The amount of thought put into this is evident, but it seems a bit "crammed."
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Probably. I'm kind of, uh, schizophrenic when writing? : d
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Originally Posted by VeggieLover
oo i like. what kind of music would this be? It vaguely reminds me of system of a down for some reason, and I hear it as that kind of harder kind of sound with an intense beat to match the extensive vocabulary. A thoughtful poem, though if it goes into song format, I would re-structure it a bit and add a little chorus bit perhaps. Post some of your other stuff please!
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It's just a piece of poetry, I hadn't planned on it as playing lyrics. Sure, I'll post some other stuff later.