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Old 08-01-2009, 07:15 PM   #6 (permalink)
Shivs
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After the afterglow of the alphabet dissipates,
agnosticism and you can unite in dystopia,
but where is that, one might ask?
drowning in the Atlantic, with the angels.


The first line in that stanza just kinda seems off to me, particularly "After the afterglow". Other than that, good work man! I can picture this coming out as something pretty cool in a number of ways.
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