Eh, It's still terrible, but after a couple of rewrites, I think it's ready to be torn apart.
Do you sometimes feel
like the sky is kinda falling
your friends aren't really real
Crawling in the prize ring
Is there a single guide
that tells you how to move
the train off it's side
and back into the groove
Is your life like a test?
that for now you've failed
at least you can rest
while the train is derailed
You have nothing to fear
nothing to doubt
nothing to fear
nothing at all
It's just a feeling
just a feeling
peace,
-nick
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It only takes one jerk to prove any hypothesis absolutely false. Like, have you ever heard the rumor that you can drop cash on the street in Tokyo and the people are so honest that someone will find it, pick it up, and take it to the cops? Well, that's absolutely 100% not true, because I once found a plain envelope on the ground with "6,000 yen" written on it. Inside was 6,000 yen. I put it in my pocket and kept walking.
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