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Originally Posted by VeggieLover
I'd rather not get bumped onto the 3rd page of oblivion, so here is my place holder!
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Yes...the 3rd page of oblivion...scary place, that. I've been meaning to write more about your poems but as you see am behind, so seeing your VeggieLover thread pop up is a good reminder!
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"Growing as it may" is actually just the way I talk and wasn't meant as a filler, nor was it a forced rhyme, but the fact that it comes off that way needs i need to spend a bit more time in editing. You could look at this line as an indication that the storm grows of its own accord, we as individuals can't control it.
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Ahh..I understand now about "may." I suppose part of what made me feel maybe it was being used due to the rhyming more than the meaning is that the feeling of a storm growing seems so ominous that I expect it to grow rather than perhaps grow.
More later!
--Erica