not horrible....but as everyone who posts on here will say: its been done before. the lyrics are also too simple for my taste, there isnt enough content. with your next song, try to make a little more of a story (if you take my meaning), rather than just talking about how much someone hates you, or saying "i want to die". people go for songs, not three and a half minutes of talking about how you want to kill yourself.
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How'd I end up here to begin with? I don't know.
Why do I start what I can't finish?
Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers.
My ego's like my stomach- it keeps shitting what I feed it.
But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore..
maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers....
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Originally Posted by Shooting Star
Remember kids: It's only real metal if the vocalist sounds like he's vomiting up a fetus. \m/
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