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Old 05-24-2005, 06:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
Trauma
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That depends if you talk about suicide in an interesting manner.

Like...
Look on the bright side suicide
Lost eye-sight I'm on your side
Angel left wing, right wing, broken wing.
Lack of iron and/or sleeping.... nice, beautiful.

Umm, your poem Heart of Nails is cliched A LITTLE....lol.
I think it's just that teenage-angst phase.
Be a little more creative, you can do it.
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