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Naked · 08-09-2009, 01:56 PM

I agree with Nick here, "pretty lights" loses it's effect... I understand the idea for repetition, but I feel it needs to be more subtle here... Try making the adjective in place of "Pretty" match the feel of the verse... For example, keep "pretty" for the first, but maybe for the verse "Show me the way/through the day/ and we'll survive/ in pretty* lights
*Instead try Guiding, or Wayward, etc.

08-09-2009, 01:56 PM	#95 (permalink)
Naked Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 48	I agree with Nick here, "pretty lights" loses it's effect... I understand the idea for repetition, but I feel it needs to be more subtle here... Try making the adjective in place of "Pretty" match the feel of the verse... For example, keep "pretty" for the first, but maybe for the verse "Show me the way/through the day/ and we'll survive/ in pretty* lights *Instead try Guiding, or Wayward, etc.