Blood Moon
['Attempt I' at using more descriptive language and focusing on a specific moment, as VeggieLover suggested.]
Whispered: (As midnight approaches I feel the hurt)
And so I stare out the window
Calmly at first, but all I know
Is there’s a rising thirst for anger.
I tense and my heart beats faster.
But I can’t succumb to anyone
So I stare out the window.
Hoping something envelopes me.
But all I see is red, through the trees
Sap runs down them like blood
The bark is all bite in the moonlight.
I laugh and cry, letting go would feel too right
I can’t stare anymore.
And so I close my eyes
Hoping to slip in the darkness
But all I see is pain.
My heartbeat stops
Eternal spinning in my head
What I’d give for just one drop
Of red.
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Rule #7 – Trust only when trusted.
Last edited by Rainfall; 09-02-2009 at 05:21 PM.
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