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Old 09-05-2009, 12:02 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Jesus christ, by the time I added an edit you had already commented. Haha, I like that.

Hey, compared to my first drafts, yours was golden. I mix up words when typing in a frenzy. I should've added more positive critique, because it was good. Kudos!
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